Useful tips on how to write a good College Essay

The personal essay is one of the components of the Common Application for college admissions. While it isn’t weighted as heavily as factors such as grades and standardized test scores, your personal essay can indeed make or break your application. A strong essay can set you ahead of students who have similar grades and SAT/ACT scores as you. Likewise, a weak essay can undermine an otherwise stellar application.

The personal essay is a space to showcase your character, personality, and story to admissions officers. It paints a more holistic picture of who you are as a person beyond the stats.

Guidelines

Choose one of the provided Common App essay prompts and respond in 650 words or less. These are the prompts for the 2018-2019 admissions season:

1.      Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

2.      The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

3.      Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?

4.      Describe a problem you’ve solved or a problem you’d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma – anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution.

5.      Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.

6.      Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?

7.      Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you’ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.

Essay Writing Tips

-          Take the time to brainstorm. It may be the case that none of the prompts speak to you immediately. That’s okay. Go through each prompt and jot down some notes on potential topics you can write about for each one. Then narrow it down to a topic on which you have a significant story to tell.

-          Organization is everything. Always outline before you begin writing. Outlining looks different for everyone – find an outlining method that works for you and organize your ideas in a coherent and logical manner.

-          Use concrete examples. It’s not enough to state that you are passionate about environmental issues. Instead, highlight an experience that illustrates how you are passionate about environmental issues. Be specific and detailed in your examples.

-          Analyze, don’t just summarize. Don’t spend the bulk of your essay merely describing an anecdote. You should certainly give an overview of the situation at hand, but the majority of the essay should be spent reflecting on the meaning and impact of the situation, rather than simply summarizing what happened.

-          Use sophisticated vocabulary. Since your essay is used to determine your college readiness, it’s important to utilize college-level vocabulary. That said, make sure you are using these vocabulary words correctly as well!

-          Avoid bragging. Many students use their college essay as little more than a chance to show off one or more of their impressive accomplishments. This is a wasted opportunity. Your essay is a space to demonstrate to colleges that you are a thoughtful and self-aware person who can analyze their experiences from a place of humility. While it’s wonderful that you scored the winning point and led your varsity basketball team to victory, what did you learn from that experience?

-          Proofread, proofread, proofread. Proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation are non-negotiable.

-          Get feedback. Give your essay to a few qualified individuals you trust, such as your college counselor or English teacher. Having these additional perspectives will enable you to view your essay more objectively and identify potential areas of improvement you may not have considered on your own. Use the constructive criticism from others to help you revise your essay as you see fit.

Above all, write about what matters to you. If you truly care about the story you are telling, your integrity will demonstrate itself on the page. A genuine, well-crafted personal essay can only strengthen your college application.

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SAT vs ACT: Which one should you take?

The SAT and the ACT are two exams used for college admissions. To get into the vast majority of colleges in the US, you have to submit a score from one of the two exams. Although the SAT is more popular, the ACT is equally valid. While you can certainly take both, it’s worth exploring the two options to see which is the better fit for your abilities.

The SAT

• What’s on it? The SAT consists of a Math section, an Evidence-Based Reading and Writing section, and an optional Essay section.

• How long is the test? The test is three hours long. If you choose to complete the optional Essay section, the test is three hours and fifty minutes in total.

• How is it scored? The Math section and the Reading and Writing section are each scored on a scale from 200 to 800, giving you a total score out of 1600. If you write the Essay, you receive a separate score for that.

The ACT

• What’s on it? The ACT consists of four sections: English, Reading, Math, and Science. It also includes an optional Writing Test.

• How long is the test? The test is 2 hours and 55 minutes long. If you choose to take the Writing Test, the test is three hours and thirty-five minutes long in total.

• How is it scored? Each section is scored on a scale from 1 to 36, giving you a composite score that is also on a scale from 1 to 36. You receive a separate score for the optional Writing Test.

Which test should I take?

The first step in choosing the right test is to take a practice test for each one. Take both an SAT practice test and an ACT practice test, and compare your scores. That being said, there are several key factors that may encourage you to choose one test over another.

Why you might choose to take the SAT:

1. You get anxious about time constraints. The ACT gives you far less time per question than the SAT on every section, making it feel more like a race against time.

2. You can write an excellent analytical essay. The optional SAT Essay asks you to read and analyze an author’s argument. If evidence-based analytical writing is one of your strengths, this may be the test for you.

3. You prefer reading questions to appear in chronological order. On the SAT, reading questions are organized in the order they appear in the passage. ACT reading questions, on the other hand, are not organized in passage-based chronological order.

4. You are comfortable with grid-in math questions. The SAT contains several math questions where you have to produce your own answer instead of selecting one of the assigned choices. The SAT might be the right option if you’re okay with solving math problems that are not multiple-choice.

5. You have a strong grasp on vocabulary. Generally, the SAT Reading and Writing sections contain more challenging, higher-order vocabulary than the ACT English and Reading sections.

Why you might choose to take the ACT:

1. You are comfortable with science. Unlike the SAT, the ACT features a science section. Consider taking the ACT if you like and excel in analyzing graphs and experimental hypotheses and results.

2. You are comfortable with geometry and trigonometry. ACT math includes a much higher proportion of geometry questions than SAT math, and a slightly higher proportion of trigonometry questions as well.

3. You can write an excellent opinion-based essay. Unlike the SAT Essay in which you analyze an argument, the ACT Writing Test asks you to produce your own argument. That is, you must state your opinion on a topic, and provide examples to support it.

4. You don’t mind memorizing math formulas. Unlike the SAT, the ACT does not provide a diagram of formulas for the Math section, which means all essential formulas need to be memorized.

5. You are not comfortable doing math without a calculator. While the SAT contains a No Calculator math section, you can use a calculator for all ACT math questions. 

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What colleges look at: The importance of having extracurricular activities

In high school, it’s certainly important to focus on your academics and achieve good grades. But academics are just one component of the high school experience. What’s another aspect of high school that’s worth your time and energy? Getting involved in extracurricular activities.

Dedicating yourself to extracurricular activities that are in line with your passions and goals is not only essential for college admissions, but also for making the most of your learning experience.

Why do colleges care about extracurricular activities?

During the college admissions process, colleges evaluate a whole range of factors to decide whether you’re a good fit for their institution. While your academic transcript and standardized test scores are the most critical factors, extracurricular activities play a major role in that decision too.

Colleges are looking to see that when you’re not attending classes or studying, you are an active member of your campus and/or community. Demonstrating strong commitments to your activities of choice makes you a more favorable candidate, particularly if you hold any leadership positions (e.g. President, Vice President, Secretary, Treasurer).

It should be noted that colleges look not only at how many activities you were involved in, but for how long, and at what level of involvement. So, while it may be tempting to spread yourself thin by joining as many clubs, teams, and organizations as possible to earn participation points, remember: quality over quantity. You’re better off devoting yourself to a few activities you care about and attaining high leadership positions within them than having shallow involvement in a large number of organizations.

How do extracurricular activities enhance my learning?

Extracurricular activities are also a great way to further immerse yourself in your academic and career interests. Getting involved expands your learning beyond the classroom. Here are some ideas of activities you might join, based on your potential career interests:

• Engineering: STEM clubs (e.g. robotics)

• Pre-med: STEM or pre-health clubs

• Pre-law: mock trial, speech and debate, student government

• Finance/business: Entrepreneurial/marketing or math clubs

• Arts/humanities: student newspaper, creative writing, theater

That said, extracurricular activities that aren’t directly related to your academic plans for college can be incredibly valuable too. For instance, joining a varsity sports team expresses to colleges that you are disciplined and teamwork-oriented, in addition to being a source of enjoyment and an opportunity to explore a non-academic pursuit.

Of course, if you can’t find an activity that appeals to you, or you have a particular interest that hasn’t been addressed by any existing club or organization at your school, you always have the option of starting your own. While starting your own club requires more dedication than simply being a member of an existing one, it also demonstrates that you are a self-starter who is capable of taking initiative!

Lastly, keep in mind that your extracurricular activities should never hinder your academics. If you find that your devotion to outside commitments comes at the expense of your grades, it’s a good idea to scale back a bit and take some time to re-prioritize. Otherwise, use high school as an opportunity to gain as many learning experiences as possible, both inside and outside the classroom.

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What colleges look at: The importance of taking Advanced Placement (AP) classes

Advanced Placement (AP) is a program that allows you to take college-level courses while still in high school. At the end of each AP class, you can take the corresponding AP exam and potentially earn college credit for the class.

There are 38 AP exams in total, but the number of AP exams offered varies from school to school. Many high schools do not offer any AP classes or exams at all.

When choosing a high school to attend, it’s important to consider whether AP classes and exams are offered, and if so, which ones.

Without further ado, the 3 biggest reasons why you should take APs are:

1.      They prepare you for college. AP classes generally function like introductory-level college courses. In other words, they’re designed to be more challenging than your average high school classes.

For instance, AP US History is a lot more analytical than the standard Regents US History offered at most NYC high schools. The AP version goes further than what happened in American history – it puts a lot more emphasis on the how and why, and focuses on broader themes. Classes like this can help you get accustomed to the type of analytical thinking that is regularly expected of you in college-level work.

2.      You can earn college credit. If you get an adequate score on an AP exam, many colleges will offer you credit in that subject. (An adequate score generally means at least a 3 or 4, depending on the school.)

In many cases, earning college credit for AP’s will exempt you from taking certain introductory courses in college. For example, a sufficient score on one of the AP Calculus exams may allow you to skip entry-level Calculus in college and go straight into a more advanced math course instead.

 3.      You’ll have an edge in college admissions. If your high school offers AP classes and exams, colleges will pay attention to whether you took advantage of them.

Taking AP classes and doing well on the corresponding AP exams shows colleges that you are motivated, capable, and ready for college-level academic work. AP classes and exam scores strengthen your college application and make you a more favorable candidate.

Overall, AP classes enrich your high school academic experience and challenge you to think more critically. At the same time, they give you a head start in your college career by offering college credit and letting you place out of introductory courses.

If you’re applying to high schools right now, pay close attention to the AP offerings at your prospective schools. Do they offer any AP classes at all? If so, do they offer AP classes you may want to take in particular, based on your interests and potential career goals?

If you’re in high school at the moment, plan ahead with regards to which AP classes and exams you intend to take and when. And of course, diligent studying and test prep will help you do well in these challenging classes, and achieve your desired scores on the exams!

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What to consider when applying to high schools (Part 2)

This post is a follow up to our last post on the different types of NYC high schools.

With hundreds of options at your disposal, it’s safe to say that applying to high school in NYC can be an overwhelming process. There are endless characteristics that can set one school apart from another. Here are some of the major factors to look at when choosing the best school for you:

Class Selection

If you have particular academic interests you would like to pursue, you can narrow your search to schools that cater specifically to those interests. Let’s say you want to dive into software development – you may look into schools that have strong computer science programs, and a large variety of math and technology classes available to you.

Advanced Placement Classes

One question you should ask yourself when choosing a school is: Does this school offer Advanced Placement (AP) classes, and if so, which ones? AP classes cover introductory college-level material in their particular subjects, and so they are good preparation for college courses. After taking an AP class, you can take the AP exam for that subject and earn college credit if you achieve an adequate score. Schools that offer a lot of AP classes can provide more opportunities for you to immerse yourself in college-level learning.

Click here to see a list of all the available AP courses.

Languages

At many schools, you will typically be required to take 2-3 years of a foreign language. The range of languages offered varies from school to school. If there is a particular language you’re keen to learn, check whether it is offered at your schools of interest.

Extracurricular Activities

In high school, it’s incredibly valuable to get involved in activities outside of academics. Take a look at the types of extracurricular activities available at different schools. For example, if you have a strong interest in acting, it might be a priority for you to attend a school that has a prominent theater club or society that puts on frequent performances throughout the year. From arts to sports to sciences, high schools provide diverse opportunities for all sorts of students to get involved.

In addition to your academics, having extracurricular activities is very important. For example, during the college-admission process, an extracurricular activity in your Common Application can be the deciding factor of getting into a school of your dreams. If you want your application to stand out from the rest, choose an extracurricular activity that you’ll enjoy and try to stick to it.

Statistics

For every school you’re interested in, make sure to check out graduation rates, as well as average scores on the SAT, Regents, and AP exams. This will give you a sense of the level of academic achievement of the average student at the school, and how well you might expect to do academically there. Greatschools.org and Insideschools.org are excellent resources where you can view these numbers.

School Size

Last but not least, consider the size of the student body. Large schools and small schools each have their unique advantages and disadvantages. Large schools tend to benefit from having more of everything – more classes, more extracurricular activities, more faculty and resources. The downside is that you won’t get as much individual attention, and it may take more work on your part to find a sense of community. Small schools often have a more tightknit community, and smaller student-to-teacher ratios mean you receive more individualized attention. On the other hand, you may discover a more limited range of academic and extracurricular activities and resources available to you.

All of these factors in combination can paint a picture of what your high school experience at a given school might look like, and help you choose the school that is the perfect fit for you.

If you ever need help choosing the right school for you, you can discuss it with us for FREE.

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